Use of credit card. Advantage and disadvantage.

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Use of credit card. Advantage and disadvantage.

In historical period there are net banking is not available .The old people always do work in cash or in coins .Because on that time coins are much used in business. Whenever people want to buy something they always give money they did not know about e money .Moreover todays net banking or e money transformation is booming like this people start doing shopping using credit card. I will discuss both points of this statement.
Firstly, e-money is very important in today’s life people always do shopping while using credit card. Moreover travelling booking is also booked by credit cards they select seats from their phones and book their favorite seat that they want .After that while using e-booking people also book their movie from home. For example in India 60% of people book tickets on phone .They do not take tickets from ticket window they feel comfortable while doing this.
Secondly, e-booking or e-shopping is good but it also have lots of disadvantages .Because some time booking that people do online they want to cancel it but it can’t happened so that time they loss their money. Moreover people transfer money from one account to other account while using net banking sometimes it gets wrong. Because a person doing net banking they send money to a person but some time the money can't transfer to the other person’s account and it also windowed from your account. For example in London 30% of people loss their money from this fine of issues.
To conclude, I think that people should try it but in limited ways .Do not be a habited of this facility

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81684981685 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33752448474 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8069280927 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.545454545 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.33497536946 450% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106310611868 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511555238555 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695621440567 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678735991156 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590590807248 0.0609392437508 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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