Vaccinating children has proven to be extremely effective at reducing childhood sickness and death.
Should governments force parents to vaccinate their children or should the decision be left up to the parents?
Nowdays, vaccinating children has increasingly become significant phenomenan among the parents to prevent their children from sickness and unexpected deaths. Governments should have a effective and strategic policy to prevent children from unforeseen diseases and deaths and at the same time parents also take more responsiblities to vaccinate their children at the right time. This essay will discuss responsibilities of both the government and parents to take right decision at right time to prevent children from sickness and death.
Governments need to focus on legislate effective and strategic policies to prevent children from unpredicted diseases and deaths. Awareness programms required to be conduct in scholls and hospitals to alert parents. For example, a survay conducted by a prestigious university has proven that public awareness is more effective than other facts. The governments have accountabilities to promote vaccinate children to reduce childhood sickness and unforeseen death.
Duties and responsibilities of the parents to be alert on the diseases and vaccinate their children at right time to prevent and reduce unexpected illnesses and losses. It is a pivotal truth that parents need to be prepare and be alert on vaccinating time frame of their children since their birth. For example, each and every parent in the world is aware of the triple vaccine. In sum, parents are having key accountabilities to vaccinating their children at right time to diminish childhood sickness and death.
This essay discussed what are the key accountabilities and strategies of both the government and parents to prevent children from illness and death. In my opinion, the governments should have a effective and planned policy to prevent children from unpredicted sickness and deaths and consequently, parents have duties and responsibilities to vaccinate their children at the right time to decline unexpected disease and death.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 8.36945812808 299% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61355932203 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16451889446 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389830508475 0.580463131201 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3699920059 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502259455919 0.242375264174 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219036825428 0.0925447433944 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112526416889 0.071462118173 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350361980226 0.151781067708 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650583537836 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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