Eventually, electric cars will solve all of our transport and environmental issues.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of electric cars with regards to this statement.
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or
observations.
In recent years, the travel by electric cars have increased in multiple folds due to globalization and technological advancement.The invention for electric cars has played vital in human's life which known as eco-friendly.Some people believe there are enormous advantages of using electric cars while others believe there some disadvantages.In this will discuss how electric cras will solve the environmental and transport issues advantageously.
Nowadays, environmental problems have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. First and foremost the emission of destructive gasoline automobiles' toxic smokes lead to the destruction of the ozone layer and subsequently cause polluting of air system. For example, people are dying in some industrialized countries without having
fresh air to inhale. In sum, people can minimize those pivotal problems by using electric cars
without harming environment.
Nevertheless, these days travel by car has become an essential factor for everyone. Some people argue that the electric cars are more expensive but it transformed the life into modern era which are more convenient to travel. For instance, people tend to buy more electric cars rather than other types of cars comparing to the past scenario.
To recapitulate, I firmly agree that there are enormous advantage in using electric cars not only environmental but also easy transportation. In my opinion use of electric cars has many advantage and they are eco-friendly and government should encourage people to buy electric cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65531914894 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20568756666 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612765957447 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.7133892715 50.4703680194 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.9 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260289792652 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102424519104 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783181460295 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129946270017 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831386566611 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.94827586207 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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