“Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
In recent time, the concept of vegetarianism has been more popular and controversial among most of the public all over the world. Some people believe that eating meat is harming to animals while, others believe eating vegetable is natural friendly and it would be more beneficial for human well-being. This essay will discuss eating vegetable helps people to be a natuaral friendly person and increase their both mental and physical health.
Firstly, most of the people are used to adding meat to their each and every diet. It is pivotal phenomenon that being a vegan someone can save even an animal's life and can be a nature lover. For example, in many prestigious restaurants and hotels around the world thousands of animals are being killed per day for daily consumption. In sum, both being vegetarian and nature lover are bonded up together.
Secondly, consuming fresh vegetables and fresh fruits is significantly impacts to human well-being and their healthier life ahead. People can get sufficient proteins and vitamins by adding more vegetables to their daily diets. For instance, in a scientific research revealed that eating vegetables might increase the consequences of healthy lifestyle. For these reasons have proven that being a vegan is more ethical and nature friendly than eating meat.
This essay discussed the ways how we can save animal's life and being a ethical, healthier human-being and nature lover. In my opinion, vegetarianism is more ethical and environmental friendly than eating meats.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
... being a vegan someone can save even an animals life and can be a nature lover. For exa...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... how we can save animals life and being a ethical, healthier human-being and natu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26748971193 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71669153152 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551440329218 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7212213164 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.4615384615 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11082836897 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506155871134 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521450564384 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837321676565 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387751307975 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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