“The solution to the overpopulation of this planet is education.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view
with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Nowadays, overpopulation is a crucial phenomenon and debatable topic all over the planet. Some people believe that the pivotal solution for the overpopulation of this globe is education. This essay will discuss why education is that much important to resolve this problem.
To begin with, most of developed countries are well educated and they have
strategic policies to manage the population among their territory. There are strong link between effective and strong education system and family management system. For example china has impose one child policy on their public to control the overpopulation. In sum, overpopulation can be minimized by educating people.
Furthermore, well educated and literate people are able to adopt themselves to smaller families are the best policy.
The planet is quickly becoming overpopulated and it directly impact to sustainable development of their country. For instance, when people aware of the natural resources and the foods are not sufficient for future, then they just tend to minimize the number of members in their respective families. For these reasons, education is the pivotal solution for the overpopulation.
This essay discussed how education helps to solve overpopulation problem. In my opinion, public awareness and education is one and only solution for overpopulation problem.
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... becoming overpopulated and it directly impact to sustainable development of their cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6354679803 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08009037737 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615763546798 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7655986003 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128393238566 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555097953257 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053040083828 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690315312809 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706310893082 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 53.1260098522 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.