It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary.Choose which position you most agree with and discu

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.

Recently the phenomenon of a year off between finishing school and starting university studies and it`s corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Some people believe that the year gap is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary. This essay will discuss why a year gap is necessary for students in recent scenario.

Firstly, from social standpoint, having a year off after finishing higher studies can provide the students with some noticeable effect which are rooted in the fact that the merit of cultural mixture , as well as relaxation are inextricably bound up. They can experience variety of cultures while having year gap with travel around and being entertain. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered relaxing before starting tertiary education is more beneficial. In sum, beneficial ramification of both cultural mixture and relaxation apparently can been seen.

Secondly, within the realm of economy, having a year off might increase the consequences of personal well-being and economic development. Moreover, fundamental aspects of doing part time works to earn some money teach them to appreciate value of the money. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of not having a year of between secondary and tertiary studies is correlated negatively with educational degradation. For these reasons a year off is significantly increase personal and economic well-being.

In conclusion, this essay discussed having a year off between schooling and going to university is more beneficial. In my opinion, I profoundly believe that benefit of having a year gap far overweigh its drawbacks.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... Moreover, fundamental aspects of doing part time works to earn some money teach them to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07440079424 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4235143049 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381914195329 0.242375264174 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139765020661 0.0925447433944 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113629213006 0.071462118173 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240766233495 0.151781067708 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781303599269 0.0609392437508 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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