“ War is inevitable outcome of life ”.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/ or examples from your own experience, observation or reading.
The idea of inevitable wars is widely debated with many people claiming that wars are the only outcome of our lives. However, there stands another perspective which says that the certainty of wars only depends on humans. In my opinion, wars can be totally avoided, if we try our best to live in peace. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are various reasons why wars are certain to happen. The most conspicuous one is that our society is full of different ideologies and opinions, which hamper its growth and make survival of humans difficult. Moreover, the current situations in the modern world have created a chaos in society. For example, the world is now full of crimes, violence, genocides which have led to devastating effects. Hence, in this scenario, wars are certain to happen in near future.
Nevertheless, there is another view, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of wars. The most primary one is that the authorities and government should take steps to reduce every possible concern which can lead to wars. Furthermore, humans should make peace and try to coexist with each other. For instance, people should not interfere in other’s life and should work on live and let live policy. Therefore, wars can only be avoided if a person thinks broadly and does not harm others.
In views of the arguments outlined above, the impact of wars is prominent in today’s world and it can be inevitable if we take every possible step to control them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92424242424 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58274453434 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.569136416 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175292555794 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056848914573 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443936237663 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104318101113 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121448743755 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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