what are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in developing countries ?
In the recent decades, low-cost airfare has made international travel easier than before which, therefore, many countries have developed their tourism industries into the key sectors of the economy. However, this has sparked a heated debate on the positive and negative impacts that brought to the developing countries. In my perspective, the benefits of tourism definitely outweigh its drawbacks due to the economic increment it brings to a country.
To kickstart, tourism can create a considerable number of job opportunities to their people in the country when a thriving tourism industry implies an increasing need for variety of services such as hotel, transports, restaurants, and entertainment. Apart from the services, tourism also results in the developing of infrastructure needed to accommodate the visitors, while bringing great advantages to their own people too. To cite an example, Malaysia, a developing country that relies on tourism industry as the key factor of growing its economy, has built monorail in all over its capital city in 1996. Since then, it has undoubtedly brought much convenience to their people to travel within the city and alleviate the traffic problems.
Despite having so many benefits, tourism can be detrimental to a developing country in several ways. A country may suffer from the loss of their traditional culture when people in the country are forced to change their lifestyle, customs and pick up some other languages in order to communicate effectively with the foreigners. One of the best examples is some of the new generations who work in the big cities are gradually losing the ability to speak their mother tongue when English becomes the only language they use in their daily lives.
In essence, global tourism is greatly beneficial to a nation’s economy and development despite putting the country in the risk of culture loss. To me, governments should continue putting effort into developing the tourism industry to bring more prosperity to their countries.
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 31.9359605911 172% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1207.87684729 142% => OK
No of words: 319.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3855799373 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94643165511 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 379.143842365 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1848057058 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.166666667 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285129097113 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11151757435 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671094069729 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183251169044 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356966085006 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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