Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion?
raising a child with ethics and values is a difficult task for every parent. Although some people argue that children should be responsible for their own acts, I profoundly believe the influence of parents plays a vital role in their children's characters and mental development.
From the social standpoint, responsible parents bring the society a noticeable effects which are root in the facts of merits. This can be explaied by parents are the closest persons to their children as they are the ones who children spend most of their time with before they grow up, and stand on their own feet. As a tangible example, parents who have good manners will result in a polite child.
From the scientific point of view, irresponsible parents can cause several ramifications to the community, which are related to the reality that demerits of inefficient relationships are crucial. To cite an example, a study conducted by a group of researchers in the University of Nottingham, have proved that 70% of the criminal crimes in UK were committed by people who were raised in both single-parents household and broken family. Thus, the truth that family environment plays a vital role in children's behaviours is undeniable.
In a nutshell, while there are several compelling arguments in both sides. I firmly support the idea of parents are held accountable for children's acts, not only social behaviour but also mental development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16738197425 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89672546824 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2573139433 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.4 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308309305139 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106980372431 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104016775478 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190427124536 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100528187807 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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