Whether experimental learning can work well in formal education, agree or disagree?
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Experience is a more effective way to teach, compared to books? Agree or disagree.
Recently, the phenomenon of new way of learning and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although, contested by many that experimental education is highly beneficial for society and educational system. I am inclined to believe that practical education helps to buildup long-lasting knowledge and skills, , such issue is regarded thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals, which is actually a plus, and I will analyse it throughout this essay.
From the educational standpoint, the formal education can provide the society with some noticeable fact that learning methods and educational system ,are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment about experimental education methods which revealed using books and documents were still popular among authorities.Thus, beneficial ramification of both life skills and excellent books apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, learning through theoretical education might increase the consequences/detrimental effects on students later life. Moreover the fundamental aspects of practical educational methods prepares the students and graduates for their career. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted graduates who had a practical education has a increased job offer by 50%.Moreover, these student also had a better career and lifestyle. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceive notion of better career opportunities.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, the benefit of experimental education method far outweigh its drawbacks.Not only do advantage of this type of prove the significance of rigid rule but also pinpoint job implications.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9053030303 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49730914209 2.71678728327 129% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6267148566 50.4703680194 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.9 104.977214359 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805307751633 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032769892931 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311253872442 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471579472659 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301935637023 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 12.6369458128 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 53.1260098522 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.9458128079 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 11.5310837438 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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