The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?
Among the humongous issues faced by counties around the world, climate change remains to be the most pressing problem. one of the major contributor of this problem is green house gases. In our discussion below we will put forward points to justify this topic.
Since industrial revolution developing nations have seen rapid pace of industrialization. And in order to promote industries, governments have ignored the pollution being spread by them. If they keep on doing so, our future generations ma have to suffer a hell kind of situation. No wonder climate changes is one of the major issues faced by most of the countires on this planet.
To combat such kind of issues governments across the planet have to come together and fight it as a one unit. First of all they need to ensure the industries spreading pollution should be away from civilization. also the waste or the by products from these multi nationals should be never get mixed with lakes or oceans. Rather it should be recycled using resources from waste management. By taking forward these steps, we can secure future of our upcoming generations.
To summarise we can say that, the most important issue faced in the new world is rapid climate change and by reducing the pollution we can overcome such problem. also this needs to be done as early as possible, so that we can save our future generations from the wrath of mother nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85416666667 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67962671011 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3814290318 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.2142857143 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141696664038 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498122229992 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049308354845 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956267987671 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399796284987 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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