The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in inflation which cause a lot of issues to governments and organisations as well. There are a number of factors which are accountable for why this is happening. In my opinion, the situation can be remedied provided some effective measures should be taken.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my instance. The most preponderant one is rising population which leads to increase in demand. Not only population rise can lead to rise in price of products , but also it will lead to decrease in value of money. Needless to say, increase in population can have far-reaching impact on government and other organisations.
Steps to deal with this situation are many and most of them are not even complicated or tough but accessible and practicable. The primary one stems on the fact that the government must make some laws to control the population so that the demands can be decreased and state of inflation can be controlled. Only when conversion efforts can be prevailed with all the factors ensured, we can expect a considerable change in curing the situation.
To conclude, dealing with the rise in population is one of the most prevailing issues from all parts of the world, which is impacting government and organisations. Needless to say, the above mentioned concrete steps can strengthen the fight again inflation and alleviate this growing concern. Its potential impact is indeed to dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99598393574 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93284844477 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538152610442 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2408735102 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6923076923 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.25397266985 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103091041227 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420361893812 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528607444609 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073066150683 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436123585157 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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