Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individual?

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Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individual?

The implication of xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries, which is fairly debatable has now gained further attention from numerous arenas. The sizeable influence of this subject has generated controversy over the potential impact of this trend. I believe that government should take immediate step to solve this problem and this will be further discussed this issue before reaching a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are several reasons why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that the western countries people hate the other country peoples because they do not want that other country people do work in their country. Moreover there are diverse accidents happened in the foreign country that the foreign people attacked on the other country peoples. For example, mostly the Sikh community get face this problems in the well developed countries like Canada, Australia and so many other countries.

Steps to deal with this problem are many but the most significant ones are not complicated but accessible and practical. Besides governments should organize the awareness programs and educate their citizens. Secondly the hate speeches and articles should be banned and punish them who write this type of articles.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to the conclusion that the problem of xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western country can be successful addressed, provided that the above stated measures are taken.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mplicated but accessible and practical. Besides governments should organize the awarene...
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...at the above stated measures are taken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46025104603 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68689624379 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606694560669 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7309439371 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164043634926 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673732368937 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902288354753 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120972225306 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998455230022 0.0609392437508 164% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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