In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of extreme or adventure sports?
These days, there is an open debate on the pros and cons of adventure sports. Some may believe that such sports activity is dangerous, while others may claim that it has some beneficial effects. From my perspective, extreme sports have both positive and negative aspects, and I will explain my point of view from both sides in the following argument.
On one hand, extreme sports are advantageous because they can boost the economic development of a country. To be specific, governments can take advantage of extreme sports as a featured element for their tourism industries to attract visitors, which may create a lot of work opportunities for local people. For example, in New Zealand, skydiving and bungee jumping are both popular activities, and it has 120 new positions to meet the needs of the increasing demand for participating in these adventure sports, which makes a 15% increase in GDP in 2010. As a result, the benefits from extreme sports to economic growth is quite obvious
On the other hand, those who argue against the notion claim that such sports may cause physical injury to human beings. Specifically, Although many extreme sports require protective equipment and professional guidance when an emergency occurs, it is too hard for people to react, which is a crucial life threatened. For instance, Paul Walker who was a professional car racer, dead in a racing accident in 2015, as the vehicle was totally out of control after the crash. To sum up, doing extreme sports is quite risky and dangerous.
In conclusion, since participating in adventure sports can both drive economic development and cause physical injury or even death, there are both advantages and disadvantages of extreme sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
... and cons of adventure sports. Some may believe that such sports activity is dangerous,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12056737589 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80468433385 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58865248227 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0721200297 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.272727273 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250556372642 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100204563849 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674770226541 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162399241079 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564819087414 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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