SOP for PhD of Oral Biology
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It sounds rather an illusion; However, it is absolutely true. There was a time when people desperately resorted to shamans to relieve their physical pain and suffer. Nowadays, a tiny tablet usually does the magic and sooths the pain. Seeking for the elixir of infinity has been the most driving incitement for all efforts that mankind has done to know its own biology. The efforts which started from superstitious believes and led to modern medicine. Infinity is really alluring and who knows when such enticing idea may come to reality? The revolutionary discovery of p...
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- If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer? 48
- Integrated essay 85
- TOEFL integrated writing: The sea otter 77
- Many people believe that it is very important to make large amount of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each view point and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position. 55
- you are going to study abroad. what do you like or dislike about this experience? why? use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 90
Comments
I didnt get to read the full
I didnt get to read the full essay - but the first paragraph only.
my suggestion is to make it a little more "about the subject". I mean I am pretty sure the admission committee have the image of what biology is and what it has done and the rest, but what they do not know is who you are and what you want in life. :)
It is great!
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