Pets should be treated like family members Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons to support your opinion

Animals and pets are a beautiful adding that many people are blessed with. They create a vital spirits and give happiness and joy wherever they locate. Some people believe that pets should treated as a family members, other disagree. In my opinion, pets should be treated just like a family member. And I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.

To start with, pets are so beneficial for our souls. They can play a role of a sincere friend. Many people live alone these days. So they need someone to live with to overcome their loneliness. For example, take my neighbor as an example. ...

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Sentence: Some people believe that pets should treated as a family members, other disagree.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to should and treated

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