Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.

Job became an important role in our life or in the other hand no one can live without job. Therefore, consider how many day and how many hours to work a week always a challenge for each people. It is generally agree today that work three days a week for a long hours will better than work five days a week in short hours. In my opinion, i totally agree about work three days in long hour for a week. In this essay i will discuss about the advantage of this problem.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in our life or in the other hand no one can live without job. Therefore, conside...
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Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun day seems to be countable; consider using: 'many days'.
Suggestion: many days
...ve without job. Therefore, consider how many day and how many hours to work a week alway...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...llenge for each people. It is generally agree today that work three days a week for ...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people. It is generally agree today that work three days a week for a long hours ...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
Suggestion: hour
...that work three days a week for a long hours will better than work five days a week ...
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Line 1, column 417, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... in long hour for a week. In this essay i will discuss about the advantage of thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, therefore, in short, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 52.1666666667 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 374.0 1977.66487455 19% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 92.0 407.700716846 23% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0652173913 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.09704101468 4.48103885553 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05788170862 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Unique words: 62.0 212.727598566 29% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 119.7 618.680645161 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6757929497 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38333731497 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198113874359 0.076458572812 259% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156844584043 0.0737576698707 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38333731497 0.150856017488 254% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.33 10.9000537634 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 86.8835125448 14% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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