What are the criteria of choosing the career? People maintain the disparate opinions on this. Some people choose the career according to the social status and some people chose according to the entertainment. From my perspective, It is better to choose the career where we will enjoy the work inasmuch as the following reasons.
First, we may face the conundrum while choosing the career according to the social status. We do not become perfect for the social status and career. For instance, when a doctor's son does not have the capacity of his own father, he may not capable to become the doctor. However, if he choose the career as he facilely performs in any area, he can concentrate his own work and the work is certainly fruitful and he become a successful person.
Second, we can spend the time while waiting to the career according to the social status. The age play the crucial role to choose the career. If we do not contemplate about our age and only concentrate to the social status, after that, to choose the easy career may be a grueling effort. Let take the my own personal example, at first, I did not choose the teacher which was easy for me because I studied industriously at the college. But, I decided to choose manager of a bank according to my social status. At last, I failed in the banking career and my teacher job was also lost due to the age.
Third, the enjoyable works satisfy our interests and we do not have the serious disease. The disease is the main enemy of our life, when we do not take the anxiety, then it will improve our health. For example, nowadays, people are suffered by the headache, and other mental problems. That's why every year the suicide rate is increasing. Which affect the whole society, as well as, country. Thus, people should to choose the career as that they take entertainment.
In conclusion, we should choose the career as we feel enjoy because we do not have the conundrum to face, our time may not be destroy and we are free from the anxiety.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
...the social status and some people chose according to the entertainment. From my perspecti...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...status and career. For instance, when a doctors son does not have the capacity of his ...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...octors son does not have the capacity of his own father, he may not capable to be...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...le to become the doctor. However, if he choose the career as he facilely performs in a...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...according to the social status. The age play the crucial role to choose the career. ...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d only concentrate to the social status, after that, to choose the easy career ma...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...reer may be a grueling effort. Let take the my own personal example, at first, I did n...
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Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...e headache, and other mental problems. Thats why every year the suicide rate is incr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, third, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60833333333 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47474746186 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3299909812 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409487832126 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145465573477 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104868659972 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249941058037 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116225840965 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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