The article states that humpback whales are able to migrate longer distances for feeding and mating purposes only possible by using the stars to navigate and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that it is interesting to listen about humpback use star while navigating but there is no any convincing evidence to trust about it and refutes each of the authors's reasons.
First, the reading claims that humpback whales are more intelligent among comparison to other animal and able to use the stars to navigate. The professor refutes this point by saying that there is no real connection between the ability to use star and intelligence. He states that a duck which is taken as an average intelligent bird also use the star because of their instinct power which is cam from by birth. Furthermore, he points out there is no fact between the connection of intelligence and using star to navigate.
Second, the article posits that only humpback migrates in straight line and it is only possible because they are guiding by some external forces. The professor says that it is true that animal are able to it because of their external forces but the fact of external forces is different than author. According to the professor, each animal has bio-magnetide which is sensitive to each magnetic field and all we know earth have electromagnetic field. The reason behind the navigating is because of internal bio-magnetide to sense the earth magnetic field rather than star.
Third, the reading says that humpback whales can float straight up for a minutes at a time because of spy-hopping. The professor opposes this point by explaining that other animal like shark has also spy-hooping behavior but they did not migrate or looking stars actually they did this to hunt a prey. Moreover, whales floating also in day time where stars are not seen so it is only pure speculation and no connection between them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... use star while navigating but there is no any convincing evidence to trust about ...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...he fact of external forces is different than author. According to the professor, eac...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...field. The reason behind the navigating is because of internal bio-magnetide to sense the ...
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Line 6, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a minute' or simply 'minutes'?
Suggestion: a minute; minutes
...mpback whales can float straight up for a minutes at a time because of spy-hopping. The p...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, third, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 324.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97530864198 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65797193642 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487654320988 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9796909094 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.0 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342947255899 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125977459486 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860481832128 0.0662205650399 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213547941379 0.162205337803 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767234607659 0.0443174109184 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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