Some of debatable topic in this world is whether more enjoyable for employees to work three days for long hours or five days a week but shorther hours. In my opinion, I agree that working five days a week is more enjoyable instead of full hour in three work days.
To begin with, it will reduce the stress level of the employees. Working full hours in three days means the employees has to finish in that specific allocation time. The employees will be stressful if the working load is high. Somehow it will make them in haste to get the job done and the result may not be perfect. On the other hand, the employees can finish their work more flexible because they have more leisure time at the night. That time can be used for them to reduce the stress. In the next morning, they will become fresh and will do the work better.
Next, it will give more time to the employees to do the best in their job. The gap between one day to another day can be allocated for the workers to think another insigh to finish the job better. There will another idea that can be applied to their work.
Last, having more off-day than working days will makes the employees become lazy. If the employees choose the job to work only three days, they will have four days to be in vacation. According to some researches, a person will become lazy if they have more time to play than to work. Also, he or she is going to feel they need more leisure time although they already off for four days. By choosing the three working days a week, it will reduce the possibility for the employees to become lazy.
In conclusion, I prefer to work in five days a week with shorter hours rather than three days a week with longer hours. There will some advantages that will happened to the employees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39817629179 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11292334951 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434650455927 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.998401826 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.1578947368 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375813446185 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141430455818 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112201490759 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258095318035 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10486228116 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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