Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.What problems does this cause?What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Essay topics:

Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does this cause?
What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Marketing is one of the techniques adopted by businesses to promote their product. Large scale companies have often big budgets to market their products. Consequently, people get enticed towards their product. However, this causes in increase in selling cost, and also it affects small businessmen but this can be tackled by offline promotion and discounted sales.

One of the major problem arises by spending a great amount of money on marketing is high selling cost of products. In other words, people have to spend more for the same product. This can also result in people to stop buying those products. For example, there is a big difference in introductory prices and actual prices of cars. Another possible problem is that, small businessmen get affected because of this. It leads to less number of sales of their product. Moreover, sometimes they have to shift their already settled business to some regional area which ultimately results in closure of their business.

To make people buy local products, there encouragement is necessary which can be done by offline promotion. It can be done by visiting nearby homes to ask people to try their products for a minimal cost and with the help of word of mouth, local sales will be increased. In addition, offering discounted sales initially will help the companies to boost their overall sales. Take local markets of India, for instance, they offer vegetables at minimal price every Tuesday. Therefore, promoting local business will result in their increased sales.

In conclusion, although people tend to buy products of big companies because of their promotional strategies, but there are some solutions available to encourage people to buy products which are manufactured locally.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roducts which are manufactured locally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68780313905 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539285714286 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6063707609 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4705882353 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482757184473 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151520733756 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828061595563 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305043117179 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024013538368 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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