Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is of no doubt that the health of a nation is the wealth of that nation. Evolutions in medical treatments and medical terminology over the last two decades notably have lifted up the costs of healthcare making it unaffordable to many people in the community. I strongly believed that health care should be free globally because of two reasons, namely the high cost of treatment and the duty of the realm toward their people.
Firstly, the salient rationale for a complimentary wellness program is to induce affordable medical cure among unemployed and aged citizens; would not be able to sustain extravagant preventive therapy. Having said that, they do not have a source of income, consequently more susceptible to death in case of illness. Nonetheless, the purpose of the government is to ensure for the wellbeing of its people. Therefore, management should take a lucrative step to improve people health by providing them with lofty medication without charging any single penny.
Secondly, health protection should be prioritizing. People may have access to consultation and other general services without any constraint. It is their legitimate right given by the government, to avail quality medical treatment free of cost. However, some disease such as cancer and heart attack are more vulnerable and demand more attention and care, thus making its treatment more expensive. Hence, free access to more specializes and expensive treatment may need some restrictions and should need some legislation to select limited patients because of excessive cost involved.
To sum up, it is clear that free health care of a good quality is an indispensable service for the community to provide because healthy people can make a country wealthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, no doubt, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88808247946 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8972353527 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252658869992 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084399974251 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429835118465 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143163994589 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311955268858 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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