You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter :1) Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college.2) Ex

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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter :
1) Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college.
2) Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her.
3) Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.

Dear Jakir,

I've received your letter last night after coming back from my office and I'd say you must throw a party as you've got the chance at Westwood College. Anyway, congratulations on your brilliant success!

In your letter, you've expressed a dilemma on going to the college for masters degree, rather you've shown a little interest on getting a job. Well, if you ask me, I'd suggest to postpone your study plan and start looking for a job more seriously. Let me explain it more clearly.

First of all, you had a plan to do your masters degree on Cyber Security, but unfortunately, you have got Robotics which you don't like. Why should you spend your next two years for a boring subject that you don't like? Rather, you should try to get a job that matches your interests. This will match with your passion and you can get both experience and some financial back-up. Maybe one or two years later, you can enroll for diploma courses on your dream subjects. I'll simply recommend you to stick to indeed.com where you can have a lots of job opening for IT firms.

Anyway, I must get off now. I'll call you next weekend during my free time and will talk more on these issues. Till then, take care.

Bye for now.

Sam.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, well, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54504504505 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27463205332 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653153153153 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5286724226 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0714285714 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320771306622 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105668487101 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731954935755 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169916200182 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716023895121 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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