The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The chart illustrates the proportion of male and female under various age groups who engaged in physical exercise usually in Australia in 2010.

Overall, It is viewed that a high number of Australian women did exercise. However, expect, men between 15 to 24 age exercise exceeds over female.

To begin, about 52.8 percent male between 15 to 24 did exercise which was regarded as the highest percentage. The proportion of men decrease with increasing as group. So, in 35 to 44, only 39.5% men did exercise then, the numbers increased steadily and reached to 47.1% in 65 and over.

On the contrary, in 15 to 24, 47.7% female did exercise regularly and consistently went up despite a slight fall in 55 to 64 and in 65 and over and became 53% and 47.7% respectively. While, in 45 to 54, about 53.3% female did exercise and it was a huge proportion.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, while, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69333333333 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68771691631 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.761004766 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205808661315 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094713702911 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614498786141 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137088491705 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625409905185 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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