do u agree or disagree? government should hide scientific discoveries
Scientific discoveries are an important part of country development. Most of the states spent a lot of money on research in order to find or discover new subjects. some of these nations like to declare their inventions to the world. However, others prefer to hide any discovery. Personally, I believe that all scientific inventions should be announced national-wide. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, country reputation would be improved tremendously. Nowadays people looking for advancement in technology and watching the news, either on TVs or on their computers, When recent scientific discovery declared, it belonged to the original country that mad this invention, which would enhance that country reputation as either strong or advanced city. For instance, Last week, Russia declared that they discovered a unique missile with high-speed, Furthermore, it attack's their target precisely. neighborhood countries will take that in mind, As this is a strong country. We can't make any political conflict with it. As you can see, when Russia declares that announcement, it builds a political reputation to itself that it is ready to fight any country.
Secondly, scientific discoveries have a massive impact on economical improvement, because this country could sale any new products with an affordable price, and protect their current currency in comparison to dollars currency. For example. in Yemen, one scientist discovered a hepatitis B medications. It is a viral disease in which it is treatment becomes impossible. The researcher found type of herbal product and mixed it with organic honey. He declared that discoveries on tv that helped him to get support from the government, So they started to export this medication all over the world with dollars currency. after one year the government announced that local Yemeni currency changes became equal to dollars currency. this experience taught me that, whatever scientific findings were, it should be supported and declared worldwide.
In sum, though some country may hide any scientific discoveries, I suggest that all scientific discoveries should not be hidden, not only because it will improve city reputation, But it will raise their political economy. That's why all governments should encourage and support their researchers to dig for all hiding scientific secrets
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41978609626 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96919204568 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585561497326 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 66.6375418475 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5238095238 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185781880708 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503296745587 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674315563148 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136108705409 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846829226495 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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