Do u agree or disagree for providing university tuition fee-free to scholars. Explains with reasons and examples to support your answers.
Education holds a basic human right that everybody deserves and it helps in creating a better world. There are various views about providing the student's tuition fee-free at university. I am of the opinion that learning should be free of charge to all enthusiastic scholars. Accordingly, the next paragraphs will vastly elucidate reasons.
To begin with, education plays a crucial role in our lives. Several reasons lie hidden that most people cannot proceed with their education after school even if they have the potential and interest. The main reason behind this is the high tuition expense. So, if all the university provides pupils with no tuition fee, and then they can further continue their education. Taking my friend, for example, my childhood buddy, she was excellent in her academics and she indeed topped the twelfth-grade but due to her poor family background, she couldn't afford the university level education. As a result, she started doing a job to help her family. This example demonstrates how poverty can impede a career despite being the ablest scholar. Hence, I strongly consider the point of allowing scholars free of the tuition fee.
Secondly, it can create awareness among the younger generation about the significance of education. Students can encourage and learn from each other. More and more people would obtain education at the university level and there would be a better society. Consequently, the world which we know would be more satisfying and a lesser unemployment problem. For instance, developed countries like the united states, Canada, most of the native population are qualified and well-educated, therefore, the unemployment rate is much lower and better living standard as compared to other countries. This example illustrates the importance of free education for a more desirable standard of living and a better world.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that I believe that providing university education for free would be a great idea to giving chance to scholars who cannot afford and also promotes transforming our nation with lesser problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79801004107 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60119047619 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.0614028225 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5789473684 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224133586433 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638253510581 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591900175021 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13025294126 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527125166667 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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