Childhood is the happiest time of person's life.
Everybody has a different opinion on their childhood days whether those days are the best days of their lives or not. As far as I am concerned, my childhood days were the happiest. This position is based on two reasons which I will elucidate in the following passages.
Childhood days are far better and the most enjoyable days because we do not have a responsibility to carry. On top of this, worries and duties are off our shoulders as our parents are there, running and looking for us. During those days, we just had to go to school, meet friends, do our homework and just be ourselves. Hence, no extra worries like we face being an adult. And as we grow older, we are ought to follow several rules and regulations to live in society yet, in no time we witness ourselves battling our duties and obligations only to follow the path of our parents. For instance, when I was a kid, I used to be the happiest kid with no restraints and had too much leisure time to follow my hobbies. But being an adult is full of commitments which are obviously not the easiest and happiest days like old childhood days. The researcher revealed that seventy percent of the people have much better and happier childhood days as compared to their adult lives.
Secondly, childhood days are the most delightful days since we are surrounded by a lot of friends, goofing and playing around with them and making some great memories. As I grew older, I have lost contact with most of the friends, since everybody got busy with their lives and families. Being an adult you have to manage and run for a better career, look after families and so on. And sometimes I feel lonely with no good friends around in addition to this, life has been really busy and offers no time to make some new friends. My individual life is a compelling example of this. Recently, I met my school friend, and she been married for five years with two kids and she told me her story that she couldn't meet anyone of our group friends as she got too busy with jobs, and kids. We both shared the same stories of not being in touch with old friends. Therefore, I miss my childhood days which are far relaxing and easy-going than an adult's life.
In summation, I am of the opinion that childhood days are the happiest days. This is owing to it because no responsibilities to carry as a child and because of more friends and leisure time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52064220183 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46175185661 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490825688073 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5227719399 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154886582816 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568651082582 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576055187475 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114282869665 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280642269325 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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