You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
say where and when the class will be held
give reasons why you think your friend might be interested
suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Jane,
I hope you have returned back from summer vacations at Mali. I am eager to see all the pictures of your trip. I want to let you know that Mr. Yung Li, from the The Cooking House School is conducting 2 months cooking course at Harvey College, Karachi located in Malir cantonment area.
As you know, I am quiet enthusiastic about cooking and always wanted to be a great chef. These classes will help us to learn secrets of Chinese cuisines and delicacies. This would be a life changing opportunity for both of us learning Chinese cuisines and delicacies from Mr. Yung Li. Classes will start on Monday and will take place 4 days a week, Mon- Thursday between 2:00 pm till 6:00 pm. This could be a great opportunity for you as you wanted to open up your own Chinese food restaurant.
Total cost would be 45,000 PKR per month but 15% discount is applicable for those who pay 02 month fee in advance. Lets meet at Dunkin Donuts this Saturday around 7:30 PM to discuss it in great detail.
Please call or text me if you want to meet up somewhere else.
Best regards,
Farrukh Zaman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
Dear Jane, I hope you have returned back from summer vacations at Mali. I am eag...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r to see all the pictures of your trip. I want to let you know that Mr. Yung Li, ...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... to let you know that Mr. Yung Li, from the The Cooking House School is conducting 2 mo...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'The' is left.
Suggestion: the; The
... to let you know that Mr. Yung Li, from the The Cooking House School is conducting 2 mo...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ooking course at Harvey College, Karachi located in Malir cantonment area. As...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... those who pay 02 month fee in advance. Lets meet at Dunkin Donuts this Saturday aro...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.525 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35180250021 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.372540685 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2727272727 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221106612378 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786574225667 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526103168202 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115570972808 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626913267338 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.