Dear Jane,
How are you? Yesterday, I browsed through a list of available courses to attend during this winter break. I am writing to you because I found one that is very interesting and I think that you might be interested too.
Ramsey culinary school in downtown will open an 8-week Thai cooking class. It is scheduled on every weekend from 9AM to 4PM starting from January 1 next year until the end of February. Its instructor is Mr. Chefson himself which makes this course very interesting because both you and I are a big fan of him. In addition, there also is a 30% discount if a group of two or more people apply together. I remember that you told me last week that you wanted to learn how to cook Thai food. I guess that you won’t deny this opportunity.
Let’s have more discussion about this matter. I’m going out for an errand near your place tomorrow morning. Can we meet at Starbux in the town center on 10:30AM?
Best,
CS
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, i guess, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57225433526 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46017427893 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.739884393064 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5350971165 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9166666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231799157085 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670319075142 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077985095086 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145343473772 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750184489662 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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