Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
We can learn about a person from the books and movies that person likes.
Reading is really good habit. Research had been done that intelligent people have habit of reading books. Books not only gives education, but it also helps to develop a personality. According to me, books and movies choices can reveal a lot about personality. I will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, books and movies can express person characteristics. For instance, the University of Texas conducted research on more than 3000 people. Based on the preference of books and movies they were able to group them into similar personality and education level. In other words, who liked the same books and movies they were having similarities in their personality or they were having the same level of education. Moreover, by reading books person become creative and he/she tries to be in the carters of the books. A person starts liking the books which match with his desires and personalities.
Second, books and movies tell about persons like and dislike. For example, in a group discussion or in interviews people attempt to convey information about their personality by telling their favorite books or movies. Most notably, if people tell you how much they enjoy inventive movies they are probably trying to tell you that they are creative, clever and cultured. Moreover, books and movies also express a person’s current concern. If persons in love or getting married, they start reading love stories or related books to marriage advice. In addition, any woman planning to be the mother. She will start reading books related to motherhood.
Lastly, today, people have multiple options for books and movies, fiction, suspense, comedy, etc. Based on this type of books and movies people get help to develop their personality. People can explore and get to know which type of books and a movie they like. In addition, books and movies also reveal a person’s profession. Whenever anyone comes to my house, they can tell that I am a health professional. I have huge collection of health related books. I daily prefer to read books about recent research in health science. I also like to watch documentaries and series related to the health profession, one of my favorite series is Doctor House M.D.
Let’s put in a nut shell, books and movies give clues about a person’s characteristics, concerns, state of mind and so forth. based on that I strongly believe that books and movies also describe numerous things about a person’s characteristics.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, moreover, really, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13235294118 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83019366039 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497549019608 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5041556029 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5555555556 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302469944853 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100400306105 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079089025748 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189643680954 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050056534221 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.