Compare the advantages and disadvantages of requiring college freshman to complete at least a year of college classes before selecting a major versus having them choose right away. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
College is a transitioning phase for high school students from adolescence to adulthood. Students attend college to get a detailed education in their career field. Most of the time, students are not clear about their career and because of that they cannot directly decide their major. However, some students have clear idea on their career and thus they choose their major at the beginning of the college. But I strongly believe that if students take time to choose their major in college is more beneficial. I will elaborate my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, students get serious and mature when they join college. College is a place where they spend more time to build their career. Students should spend one year to get ample information about basic subjects and then pick a field of their interest for a major is more advantageous. For example, if a student somehow became a computer engineer, but his interest and expertise is in mechanical, he/she won’t achieve a good job success and satisfaction.
Secondly, taking a time to choose a major can potentially save money and time both. For example, if student choose a major without giving a full consideration, he/she may find out after a year or two that it is difficult to complete the courses and exams of this major, and thus, it is too late now to restart again.
Lastly, there are few demerits also, if students waste their one-year time for only selecting their major, it might affect their career too. They delay their graduation compare to their peers. If students have some subjects as a prerequisite for their major, that case, they should not waste their time just selecting major.
Let’s put in a nutshell, some decisions are most important for our life because it might change our future. Thus, students should not rush before making their mind for major since it is about their career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94968553459 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5515840313 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6425103859 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5882352941 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120881663526 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523788101582 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034557640215 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760856408325 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343503419878 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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