Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain.
To understand zoos, we must learn how these institutions work. Zoos are very important institutions where people can learn about environmental preservation. People also learn about food chain that every living being is part of natural cycle. Besides it, zoos are also able to protect animals on the edge of extinction. Therefore, I believe that these installations should be supported rather than criticized. I will elaborate my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, zoos are one of the places where scientists can be close to a wide variety of species of animals and learn about their eating behavior, their mating habits and collect data whenever they feel like to. This way, by having a deeper knowledge about the animal, scientists can help species those are in danger. Also, the artificial fertilization technique can help animals that are on the edge of extinction.
Second, with the advancement of scientific studies and research zoo has changes compare to before. Animals are kept in larger cages and rangers try to imitate natural habitat to give animal comfort life in zoo. Their daily diet is controlled by dietitians with a balanced amount of vitamins and minerals. Moreover, research has shown, animals which live in the cage even live longer than animals that live freely in the wild. Additionally, the university students who are studying zoology, they can research on animals. And it is not possible to go to jungle frequently to collect sample. So, it is easy for students to go to zoo and research about animals. For instance, in Dubai, one of the biggest research institutes at the zoo where thousands of students can do research work on animals.
Lastly, zoos are important because visitors can learn about various species. For the new generations to be able to see animals freely in the wild, people have to protect the environment, other than destroying our remaining forest to build more human settlement and pushing animals on the edge of extinction. In zoo, children can see animals, touch them and even feed them. When I went to the Huston zoo center with my niece. At that time, we saw a withe tiger and she was so amazed by looking a white tiger. She also experiences feeding few animals.
Let’s put in a nutshell, I strongly believe that properly managed zoos provide excellent opportunities such as educational purpose, research work, fresh air or relaxation, therefore it is very useful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...animals, touch them and even feed them. When I went to the Huston zoo center with my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0570719603 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75143924075 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560794044665 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2506296735 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9166666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7916666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084777352426 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273087583104 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272022860526 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483557221874 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190369801922 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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