It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
World is changing every second. People should have knowledge of the incidents going around. Even though these crises seemingly not affecting our life directly, virtually it will cast more important influence on us that we are not aware of. My reasons are here.
The first and the foremost, climate change is a real problem and pollution is a biggest factor behind it. Economic growth in the countries such as China and India leads to increase in overall temperature. Even though the united states of the America have many policies to control the pollution, the weather has much affected due to climate change. Recently, many hurricanes struck to the different part of the country and created disasters that never happened in the history of the country. Hurricane Harvey destroyed the city of Houston in Texas, hurricane Irma devastated the state of Florida and many more places were affected hugely because of that.
Secondly, change in one country can effect on large scale to other countries. For example, President Trump is planning to increase import tax on aluminum. Which might lead to the trade war as other countries are going to get affected tremendously through vast economical changes. And people also suffers due to increase in tax collection.
Lastly, if we have better knowledge about other countries advancement, we can learn from that and imply similar strategies for our own country. For instance, Prime Minister of India Narendra Modi took a decision to announce demonetization of currency to prevent long standing issue of corruption in the country. The after effects of the event resulted in the improved economical image of the country in the international market as well as the local conditions.
In conclusion, in this tedious world it is beneficial to have a knowledge of our surrounding for the betterment of our society as well as our country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13680781759 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73719927386 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8469697655 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7647058824 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132175277009 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359461944503 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421583210403 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708948298839 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613566996297 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.