Often, we are required to participate in group projects at school or work. Sometimes we must work with the people who share our opinions and ideas However, sometimes we must work with the people who have completely different opinions than us. Which option do you prefer? Use reasons and example in your answer.
Working in a group is the best way to solve any problem. Group projects are important to improve various skills in our lives. It helps people to improvise numerous soft skills and team building skill. For a group project, some people believe that they should work with the people who do not share the same ideas; others disagree. In my opinion, when working for a group project people who share same opinion or ideas should work as a team for few reasons; such as, the same opinion helps to solve the problem quickly and accurately. I will elaborate on my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, when people work as a team, they are not only more involved in the project, but they become committed and respectable to each other (more invested in the project, but they also become devoted to each other). Team members support each other and adopt each other’s working styles. The team relationship may result in trustworthy friendship. That leads to offering a hand on other assignments and sharing ideas or brainstorms to push each other to reach personal and professional goals. For example, when I was working as a physical therapist (PT) in India, I got an assignment to take an assessment of patients at the free camp organized by a non-profit organization. In that camp, I had to work with other newly joined PT, but we were having the same ideas to work as a team to take the assessment of all patients with the same protocol. So, we were able to complete all patients’ assessments on time.
Second, another key advantage of group work in an office environment is that it can increase efficiency and productivity. When a group focuses on a project or task, they tend to get more work done than if an individual took on that task individually. A group approach can also lead to cost savings for business because it can increase productivity without requiring to hire more employees. Group work also helps business to meet their individual and team goals more quickly because more people are committed to each project. That would be possible when all team members agree with each other’s ideas; if not project work would take more time than planned and sometimes project may get postponed or terminated. Each individual has his or her expertise on some aspect of the project needs. Allowing people to work together for a common goal will bring synergy to make the project more interesting and fun. For instance, during my PT school, I got an assignment to work as a team; but my team members were not able to come to any conclusion on which topic we should present our assignment. Thus, we ended up missing our due date of submitting our assignment and we all suffered in our grades.
In conclusion, group work is the essence of learning various skills, but I believe that it only possible when a person has team members who share the same ideas and opinions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hiring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: hiring
...increase productivity without requiring to hire more employees. Group work also helps b...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... who share the same ideas and opinions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2387.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75498007968 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67406443921 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450199203187 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8170566216 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.782608696 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8260869565 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341890949709 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100221165552 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726354477318 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214288004129 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617015205838 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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