Often, we are required to participate in group projects at school or work. Sometimes we must work with the people who share our opinions and ideas However, sometimes we must work with the people who have completely different opinions than us. Which option do you prefer? Use reasons and example in your answer.
Group projects are part of our everyday life. They are important to improve various skills in our lives like soft skills and team building. People often have different opinions on working with a group where groupmates should have the same ideas or different ideas. In my view, people who share the same opinion or ideas should work as a team. Because when I work in a group project, it helps me to solve a problem quickly and accurately if my group mates have similar ideas as mine. I will elaborate on my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, when people work as a team, they not only become more invested in the project, but they also become devoted to each other. Team members support each other and learn from each other’s working styles. Eventually, the team relationship may result in trustworthy friendship which can afterward help to reach personal and professional goals. For example, when I was working as a PT in India, I got an assignment to take the assessment of patients at free camp, which was organized by a non-profit organization. In that camp, I had to work with other newly joined PT, but since we were having the same ideas to work as a team, we were able to complete all patients’ assessments on time. Not only that, but we also became good friends after that camp.
Second, another key advantage of group work is that it can increase efficiency. When a group attack starts a project or task, they tend to get more work done than an individual who completes the task without any support. A group approach can also save a lot of time and your business to meet individual and team goals more quickly because more people are committed to the project cost savings That would be possible only when all team members agree with each other’s ideas. if the scenario is opposite of that then project work takes more time than predicted and sometimes project get postponed as well. For Instance, when I was in my PT school, our class was given an assignment. The topic of an assignment was to present an exercise for the old age people. It was as a group assignment. We had 30 minutes of preparation time before the presentation that day. I met with my group and discussed on which topic we should present, but we could not decide on time because everyone has different suggestions and reasons. And we end up without presenting anything due to poor group coordination.
In conclusion, group work is the essence of learning various soft skills and team building skill, but I believe that it only possible when a person has team members who share the same ideas and opinions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69716775599 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62106624794 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485838779956 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5243741129 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7391304348 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9565217391 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362799007084 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104774188878 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859191390698 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219942120267 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725990957494 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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