All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the posit

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All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Will studying abroad at least one semester in a foreign country fruitful? The answer is obvious. This will bring the dynamism and the sustainability of students on the new environments. While some may argue that the studying abroad for a semester will not actually benefit, but I agree with the topic of the issue.
Firstly, university students would be highly benefitted to know how the technology and the methodology of teaching is going on other than his/her country. This will help to bolster his ideas of understanding the same subject with different perspective. There is a provision for majority of the universities to transfer the student for semester to the foreign country. To clarify this, students from UAE university can get the idea of hydropower engineering with the lucid examples and field visit when he/she make transfer on a Nepali university.
Moreover, students when study a semester on abroad, then they can get familiar to the new environment, get to know new cultures and traditions. For example the western and the eastern cultures are quite different. Family is the first priority in the eastern society especially on the south Asian countries. One has to ask for almost everything if any ideas has to be implemented on the house. However, western culture focuses on the individual success and the priority. Students can get an opportunity to know the different traditions and get dynamic to adjust on the different environment conditions and cultures. This will eventually help to develop the basic ideas on interaction with the new people after the student get to involve in job market.
While some may argue that students may get unfamiliar with the new environment, may get uncomfortable and eventually the focus on the course will decrease, but majority of the students will get success how to cope with the dynamic world. The pros side will obviously suppress the cons side.
For these reasons, it is fruitful for the university or the college students study at least one semester in the foreign country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, as to, at least, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08035714286 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83795485181 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488095238095 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9920628492 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217860062149 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792487922322 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918931563341 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167204053209 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106672457933 0.0667264976115 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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