Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is often believed that knowing about the events happening around the world is significant. Nowadays, the connection between nations is much closer than in the past, and thus make it more critical to know things happened in other part of the world. I strongly agree with the opinion that knowing about the international events plays a crucial part in life. I feel this way with three main reasons, which I'll explore it in the following essay.
First of all, I believe that every single event happens somewhere around the world can have influences on our lives to some extent, even though the event might look minor from the surface. Recent event occurred in Mainland China is an example of this. The massive explosion in a chemistry factory had killed many people's life. This event showed the lacking of solid training programs and insufficient standard operating process in the company. It also raised an attention in my country, where the government legitimated stricter laws on all chemistry factories to prevent labor workers from being harmed. Some insurance companies begin to provide better contracts for companies and employees. This example clearly demonstrates the benefits of understanding the world you are living.
Secondly, knowing events from other parts of the world ensures one's safety. Especially for those who like to travel abroad, it is crucial to know the circumstances such as security issues. For example, if you plan to travel in South America, you have to aware the recent events brought by the conflicts. Since the conflicts between communities are getting tenser, foreign press has warned the travelers not to visit these countries at this moment. If it hadn’t been the notice of the current events in South America, one couldn’t have the ability to protect himself.
Thirdly, learning things that happened outside your country can broaden your horizon. It helps us learn more about political issues, climate change, economy growth, culture changes and even environmental protections. One interesting example is the climate change near the North Pole. The green house effect caused by global warming affected the inhabitants of polar bears. The increasing temperature causes the glaciers to melt and there was a decline on the land where the polar bears live. This phenomenon drew people's attention to environmental protections. As a result, governments in many countries introduced more policies to reduce the pollutions caused by factories. It seems that small event happens elsewhere has nothing to do with your own country, however, as demonstrated in the example, it actually affects people’s life in an unpredictable way.
In conclusion, there is strong evidence that knowing the world is important. It not only makes us a more open-minded person but also helps us develop a better living. It can also save people's life in ways that one might not have expected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2460.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24520255864 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73949123319 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 757.8 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0878184967 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1111111111 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3703703704 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96296296296 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249777762465 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061866594097 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063737519301 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127944384566 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636973951654 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.