You have received a job offer for a position you have wanted for a long time. You are expected to start on July 1st. However, you can only start a week later due to personal reasons. Write a letter to Mr. Jackson, your new boss. In your letter:•show you

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You have received a job offer for a position you have wanted for a long time. You are expected to start on July 1st. However, you can only start a week later due to personal reasons. Write a letter to Mr. Jackson, your new boss. In your letter:
• show your enthusiasm for the job offer
• explain the problem
• suggest what you can do
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr. Jackson,
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Mr. Jackson,

My name is Kumar S Sampad and I received the job offer yesterday to work for your company. However, I am writing this letter to express some of my concern on the date of joining for the assigned role as your subordinate.

I must appreciate the culture of your organization that I have heard from other people. To be honest, I was really looking for this sort of quality environment which will definitely boost my productivity. However, as stated in the offer letter, I am supposed to join at your team by the 1st of July, but, I am afraid, I am going to face a few difficulties to make it on the dot.

As I am currently staying at Danforth with my family, it will be quite tough for me to relocate and settle everything within this short span of time. I hope, an additional one week will be enough to shift my house and finalize other issues smoothly. I think, you understand the issue and will allow me accordingly. Additionally, within this one-week time frame, I would like to conduct some self-study related to business nature. I hope, you can share some learning materials for that purpose, provided that the confidentiality will not be compromised at all.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Kumar S Sampad.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, look, really, so, i think, sort of, i am afraid

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67410714286 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80703479777 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5800820053 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250324070715 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910168868188 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523227041752 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147346131052 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276060821891 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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