Write a letter to HR department of a company requesting information about a interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter:Describe the position applied forWhy the interview went wellWhy do you need the results.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to inquire about an interview that i have given in past week at your company held on 26th May, the coordinator assured me that results will be announced by the end of week but still no update has been shared with me till now.

I have applied for Technical Analyst post that required 5 years of experience, according to the interviewer my resume was outstanding among other candidates and for most of the questions that were asked i have given answers clearly with examples and same has been appreciated by the interviewer. The reason for which i am writing this letter is that another form has offered me a similar position but my inclination towards your company is more hence my primary goal is to be hired by your firm.

It would be great help if you can share the result at the earliest or at least let me know the status of my application so that i can work things out with other firm.

Awaiting for your kind reply.

Thanks in Advance!!!

Yours Faith fully
Gunjan Pratap

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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...ow the status of my application so that i can work things out with other firm. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...can work things out with other firm. Awaiting for your kind reply. Thanks in Advance!!...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, still, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61202185792 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4866690467 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.3601561215 44.8134815571 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 76.5299724578 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 16.8248392259 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164288750091 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754174662682 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366106579569 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071378262603 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515695600209 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 8.37731958763 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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