Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Gunjan Pratap and I stayed at your hotel at 26th and 27th December in room number 107. During my visit to Delhi , my company booked your esteemed hotel for stay but rather than having the experience of luxury suite , it was quite cumbersome for me as the thermostat of my room was not working.
I arrived at the hotel at 11:00 AM in the morning and the reception gave me the keys of my room. After getting fresh I started feeling a bit cold in the room, initially I though the setting for thermostat might be wrong therefore I tried to rectify it but it was in vain. Then, I contacted the room service, they assured me that someone is coming to check the issue but no one came for two hours. I had to rush to a meeting and before going out I asked to repair the thermostat but even after my arrival late night the issue was still there and worsen over the time.
I was tired therefore I put on some extra clothes and slept under the blanket. Next morning again i ran through the same procedure and this time an electrician came to repair the thermostat but even he was not able to fix it and asked to me to was it as he will get help. But it all ended in a false promise and the issue was never corrected.
Such actions does not suit your name as you are among the top hotel chains and should prioritize on customers. I would like to have my refund for the problems that I faced along with that I need you take action again the room service and your staff responsible for electricity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oom number 107. During my visit to Delhi , my company booked your esteemed hotel f...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...an having the experience of luxury suite , it was quite cumbersome for me as the t...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'AM'.
Suggestion: AM
...ing. I arrived at the hotel at 11:00 AM in the morning and the reception gave me the keys of m...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it but it was in vain. Then, I contacted the room service, they assured me that s...
^^
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t under the blanket. Next morning again i ran through the same procedure and this...
^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'do'.
Suggestion: do
...ue was never corrected. Such actions does not suit your name as you are among the...
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Line 9, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e top hotel chains and should prioritize on customers. I would like to have my re...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 291.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23367697595 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2621627963 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.6507105253 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 16.8248392259 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209168672362 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791742553863 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433485696715 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131313235559 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415252914457 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.55 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.