You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:•say which advertisement you are answering•describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/the

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about a recent advertisement for a teacher required for night classes. Local newspaper "The Hindu" had described that you need an english teacher at the community college.

I have completed my bachelors in English language and currently working as a professor at University college. Teaching english subject to the students has always been my keen area of intrest which I have been doing for past 6 years. As we all aware that english has become a neccessity in modern world , my techniques have always helped students to perform beter and learn faster. Method of teaching that is used by me involves regular interaction, learning through examples and including language in daily communincation.

Apart from proficiency in language, I can also teach elementary science classes which would help students to get good understanding of basics and concepts involved in daily life.

Regards
Gunjan Pratap

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... has always been my keen area of intrest which I have been doing for past 6 years...
^^
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... has become a neccessity in modern world , my techniques have always helped studen...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41447368421 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93674320933 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723684210526 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4114887147 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255041366372 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086632807697 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852163444786 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167103391598 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141095002894 0.0580467560999 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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