Over a long period, there are heated debates about whether the government are supposed to take responsible for residents’ bill on health care and education. I partly agree that the government allocate more financial budgets on these public services, while both systems require the help of private organizations.
On one hand, there are lots of reasons why I agree that government should take the duty on education and hospitals. Achieving basic education and treatment is a basic but essential right for every citizen living in modern world. In addition, because residents pay numerous taxes to governments, they are supposed to provide enough effective services in return.
On the other hand, not only governments but also other participants could play important roles to cope with these problems. Let me give the detailed explanations. In terms of education, we cannot offer the same education for each unique child. The second point is that if government pays all students’ tuition, it’s unfair for those who could not enter the university. That’s why government encourages private schools and universities to offer various educational choices. Meanwhile, more subsidies and scholarship need be given to the excellent and promising students growing up in low-income families. As for medical care, nowadays, it has already become a heavy burden for countries’ fiscal budget while spending on treatment is rising significantly. According to numerous studies, more and more patients suffer from cancer and chronic diseases such as high blood pressure and diabetes. Commercial insurances help individuals and governments out by sharing and resist the risks together.
After having discussed the most pertinent points on the issues, I feel convinced that although public sectors should be responsible for the educational and medical system, private institutions related to education as well as commercial insurance companies could make our society work better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, well, while, as for, i feel, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64333333333 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01650828314 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4885596001 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199560116425 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614736979315 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364455328825 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116013158939 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220941150378 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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