Under the background that the metropolitans and even the small cities suffers more and more serious problems of congestion and pollution, some people argue that the price of petrol should be increased. While I partly agree this can make a difference, there are other measures we can do.
The rise of price influences consumers' behaviors in many ways. First of all, considering the famous economic theory, namely, demand-needs theory, price is an effective factor to change the relation between demand and needs of products. The needs of oil declines with the higher price. As a result, people are less likely to drive their cars spontaneously. However, servals needs are still difficult to adjust, which will result in increasing citizen's burden.
Luckily, governments and individuals have various measures to choose. Governments can allocate more of their budgets on developing communal transportation, such as buses, underground and expresses, which are more effective and environmentally friendly. Secondly, better designs of roads and urban planning benefits a lot for these problems. For instance, when housing regions are scattered in the suburb and jobs are concentrated in CBD, commuting could cause too much pressure on transportation during rush hours. Finally, governments could hold some activities to encourage individuals to improve their awareness. As individuals, we are supposed to change our behaviors to reduce the pollution and protect the environment.
After having discussed the most pertinent points of this issue, I feel the only logical conclusion is that the rise of price can deal with the problems in some degree and both governments and individuals are able to try other potent effective steps.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: You should probably use 'decline'.
Suggestion: decline
...nd needs of products. The needs of oil declines with the higher price. As a result, peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49063670412 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98056284232 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4071475807 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11994752749 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361635845598 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336192958269 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710752688016 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385548323965 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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