Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this in connection with an event that was organized on 12th August 2019 at your esteemed hotel for the employees of InfoTech Solutions Ltd. I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude in organizing this event and for providing the support for making this event a success.
According to the feedback which I received, most of the guests liked the ambience and decorations of the meeting hall, customer service, cleanliness and hospitality of the hotel staff.
However, in spite of the overall contentment with the hotel amenities and staff, some guests were not satisfied with the quality of food served during lunch. Some food that was served was stale especially the Rotis and breads. The meat was tough and undercooked. Some dishes were extremely spicy than was expected to be and was difficult to eat.
Taking into consideration the above mentioned insights, I highly recommend you to supervise and have a control over the kitchen and cooking process. I also suggest you to have frequent quality checks on cooked food to ensure customer happiness and satisfaction. Considering the favourable remarks we have seen so far, this will not be officially marked in your hotel website, as this can ruin the reputation and fame of the hotel. Simply consider this mishap as a misfortune and take better care next time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as to, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02212389381 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68597191731 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62389380531 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6242177437 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.181818182 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253336789493 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826608175526 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507658035933 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139014379522 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040138759805 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.