Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents
and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Worrying about children's future, parents probably encourage their kids to choose a field with more chances to get a profit job. Some pupils even hold this belief as truth and stick to it, say trying their best to study in electrical engineering, marketing, management. However, occupy an seemed rewardful position doesn't necessarily means a promising life. It is happiness, having fun, and meaningfulness that evaluate the value of one's live. In my opinion, the college students should consider a field of study of which they have gifts and interests.
First, with such talents and interests, th...
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Sentence: More over, if they find themselves happenly having a talent for that subject, as in the case for most people that they interest in things they have gifts, they will feel a sense of accomplishment more often.
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Sentence: They will probably work in a good mood which oblige them to whistle and sing, revealing their furtune.
Error: furtune Suggestion: fortune
Sentence: To them, salary, persquisit, or even fame are no longer the most important concerns.
Error: persquisit Suggestion: persist
Sentence: The more sensible consideration is whether this job can makes them bring their skills and talents in to play, of course, with an assumption that they can affod their expense.
Error: affod Suggestion: afford
flaws:
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.235 0.35
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
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