Since the creation of humans, people have lived in different groups, so this demonstrates that man kinds in nuture need to have a relationship with others. Following that, how we should behave in our relationships has become controversial topic of discussion. Although some people may believe that we should keep away from our friends to understand their importance in our life, to be the best of my knowledge, for the following reasons, I subscribe to the theory that we should keep our family and friends close to us.
The first vital point to bear in mind is that nearing to our friends, we can overcome problems which we face in life much easier. In other words, each individual indeed has their own life; however, in the case of grappling with issues, it is essential to have someone to help. As a result, keeping family and friends close not only solidifies relationships but it also helps rely on someone in the case of difficulties. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. I remember the time when I needed money to buy a car, and I could not have gotten a loan, so I explained the situation to one of my close friends. Then he gave me the money I had needed and told me gave me the money back whenever you could. It was kind of him to lend me the money. Had he not helped me, I could not buy the car even now.
Besides helping in tough situations, having kept someone away, we may lose our friendship with them. To elaborate more, seeing someone less in your life, you more likely to forget them. Drawing from my own experience, one of my friends, who was very close to me since we met each other every day, left the country. After a while, even though I called him time to time, we could not keep the close relationship that we had in the past. Therefore, I understood how it is possible to forget even close friends when you keep them away from your life.
Thus, with the above in mind, keeping people you love as close as possible not only helps you faceing problems but can also be an excellent way to prevent the relationship from becoming loose. Therefore, it is strongly suggested that keep the friends close as possible.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, kind of, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50374064838 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54043365353 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496259351621 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1556170886 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297254616081 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088156949341 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813621290018 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198344192359 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102638648966 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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