To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
In today's modern world of rapid development, the cities are the integral entity that determines the country's overall status - which includes culture, socio-economic, technology, development as well as political status - well that is at least how most of us sees it. But, i think just by studying major cities is not a genuine way of generalizing the characteristics of nation or society.
It is a fact that major cities are the most populated ones and people all around the country reside there.So, it is important to take the big cities into account if one were to know about its characteristics. A society is group of people and its characteristics is defined people behaviors, cultures, traditions and its history.However, major cities are not enough to justify the characteristic features of society as a whole. For an instance, Delhi is a capital city of India, has lots of tourist places and contributes a fair amount of cultural heritages but, extrapolating characteristics just on the basis of major cities for such a culturally and socially rich country ,would be undermining the whole notion of society. Like Kathmandu,a capital of Nepal is also a major city - also has a number of tourists places for attraction. Apart from that, Nepal also has multi-linguistic and multi-cultural people with their own history and traditions-most of them are living in countryside. So it is necessary to study other rural parts of the cities as well.
In the present world, western culture are most followed by much of the countries and urban cities are the most influenced by this. People are adopting to this change and one studying the major cities is likely to miss the social customs and tradition if he were to follow the big cities only. The true essence of the society are somewhat obscured by the current modernization and to generalize on the basis of this will botch the result. People living in the countryside are different from those living in urban areas. They have different lifestyles, customs and follow different etiquettes.
However, big question is --Can we really define a society or a country as a whole with its characteristics. We can find different cultures and traditions in different society. Like a dice, it has multifarious variations-some might be modern, some undeveloped ,some good and some bad. But , how are we really going to define a society? Are major cities enough? I think it is just like judging a book by its cover. The nuanced subtleties also make a big differences in defining a characteristics of a society. . Like a little village in Nepal called Illam is famous for its tea production and Pokhara ,one of a big cities, famous for its natural resources, which ones should we take into account?. If we follow author then, we will miss the peculiar picture of tea production altogether. Does author means that bucolic and pastoral areas are not significant for study? If we miss that then, it will be like missing important ingredient of a recipe.
In conclusion, it might be important to study major cities for understanding of superficial characteristics of a society but, altogether it is not sufficient to leave it at that. A deeper understanding of its villages and areas other than the big cities are also equally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, then, well, apart from, at least, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2745.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 546.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02747252747 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13376789983 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467032967033 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 889.2 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2036932058 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.576923077 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2881827888 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762998124779 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666235877472 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171648701906 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051015288638 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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