Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Financial development is one of the crucial requirements for a country. Besides the economic development, there are different kinds of progress which are also significant. While many governing bodies mostly inclined towards financial improvement, some people supports other sectors' development as well. I believe that improvement in all sectors is equally important to run a country efficiently.
First, to provide the basic needs to the nation and to keep pace with the modern world, improvement in the economic sector is essential. For example, Bangladesh is now considered as a mid-developing country because of its improvement in GDP and other financial aspects. Now the government facilitates the nation more and also supports the refugees of Myanmar. So to conduct sound governance, the government must set a goal to achieve economic development.
On the other hand, improvements in other sectors along with the economic sector, such as education, innovation, livelihood etc. are equally vital for a country. For instance, a little boy in an undeveloped region of Africa discovered an instrument to use wind energy in the agricultural sector. His discovery was in the preliminary stage which can be demolished if he does not get proper patent. Moreover, without educational advancement citizens will not be able to support modern society.
In my opinion, I believe that economic progress is important but to accelerate the country’s growth, the government should pay attention to other sectors equally.
To be concluded, it can be said that development in a country’s finance and other categories are proportional to each other. Progressing in one sector while leaving others in the dark can never be an indicator of the proper governance of a country. I think that the government should shed light with the same significance to the development of all sectors in the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sectors'' or 'sector's'?
Suggestion: sectors'; sector's
...improvement, some people supports other sectors development as well. I believe that imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43771043771 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21620913173 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552188552189 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0714259296 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275831012042 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875231548132 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608950453066 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160922569362 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594868101026 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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