A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

A common national curriculum should be established for all students until they enter college. My support for this statement is elaborated below.

First of all, If the national curriculum is same for all the students throughout the country, then a standard of education will be prevailed. For example, students who lives in metropolitan cities generally get much privilege than the students from remote undeveloped area of that country. Their nourishing process is firm which helps them to easily cope up with the difficulties of undergraduate, graduate or even further level problems. On the ther hand, students of remote area might easily get distracted in the intricate phase of life. If there is a common educational agenda for all students until they enter college, their source of basic knowledge will be same which will bring equillibrium to nationwide students.

In addition, national requirement for the same curriculum is appreciated for the people who change places occationally for their job purposes. If the standard is not same throughout the nation then a student might feel frustrated to step ahead in the new journey and which will hinder the progress of that young mind. But, if they are being tought under same program all around the country, it will be not hamper the student's pace even if teh student switch institution in the middle of the year. So, a national requirement for same study program is a crutial need.

Moreover, after passing school a student needs to go to university. Good colleges usually admit students via admmission process where academic performance rather than extra curricular activities reflects mostly. The student came from a different place outside the capital city who read under different curriculum than the college followed curriculum, which is tought in capital city, will surely face difficulty to get an admission. To eliminate this unusual trouble nation should require a common curriculum for all students until college.

However, different person has interest in different area. It might not fruitful if the national curriculum follows the same curriculum for all. For example, students who wants to study in vocational subjects, they will choose subjects according to their need which will help them to pursue their career in future.

Above all, though interrest varies from person to person, the same national curriculum until a student enters college is nedded to nourish all the young minds equallly.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33078880407 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72793237297 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516539440204 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7320545385 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.263157895 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448093985188 0.243740707755 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16421158488 0.0831039109588 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1533228337 0.0758088955206 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282769266143 0.150359130593 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566703911997 0.0667264976115 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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