The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Youth is the builder of our future society. Cooperation and competition is the two sides of a coin. To be a youth leader in government, industry, or other fields society can train it's youth generation by establishing the mentality to cooperate with others rather than compete with them. I agree with the given statement.
We are social being so it is impossible for us to live alone in an isolated place. In our journey we need help from other people to make our path smoother, to achieve our goal. For example, in the primitive society people who were expert in making cloths exchanged their goods with other expertise people and vice-versa. This trend is noticable still now. We buy goods with money what we cannot produce. This tendency to cooperate with each other helped people in the past and in the present too.
We are always in demand of future leaders which will rise among from the youth. For instance it can be said that in election one will be winning team and another will be opponent party. If extreme rivalry exist between two parties it will <span class="highlighter highlight-on">impede</span> the country's progress. Only by working together with harmony long term success can come.
Moreover, different person has disperate abilities. For example male and female are different not only in their physical structure but also in their thoughts. While solving a problem, it might show more <span class="highlighter highlight-on">auspicious</span> result if both work together than they are working distinctly with their own kind.
However, competition has also some beneficial impact on society. Without a zealous nature people might not feel motivated to explore new things which will eventually lag their country behind in progress. For instance, one of the top brands Apple always keep introducing new innovation to stay strong in the rat race of technology. Without a mentality of competition, it would be hard for them to stay on the top for a long time.
In conclusion, it can be said that though competition works as a <span class="highlighter highlight-on">catalyst</span> in the progress of a society in governance, industrial and other sectors, extreme level of competition can be a deterrent too. So, i believe that the sense of cooperation in youth leaders can be the most effective way through which a society can get reach it's hayday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
...op brands Apple always keep introducing new innovation to stay strong in the rat race of techn...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
...competition can be a deterrent too. So, i believe that the sense of cooperation i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...ich a society can get reach its hayday.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.94922992422 2.79657885939 141% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.1687563973 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5652173913 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188052688399 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481009792849 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063786092399 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928448700045 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497381708123 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.